Intro = 2/2
Outro = 2/2
Blend = 2/2
Transitions = 2/3
Bass = 1.5/2
Originality = 3/3
Drums = 2/2
Melodies = 2.5/4
Score = 17/20 = 8.5/10
Couldn't have done better.
Yes, good for Xmas
The meaning of song is nice and thank you for uploading this but, you've got to workout your voice or if you already have, then focus more on notes you sing. Not that I could sing better than you do but hey, who needs talent when you got skills?
I know this sounds like a cop-out, but it's actually a microphone quality problem. Due to lack of funds I'm forced to use the stick mike that came with my sound card, and this is the best it can do. And this is after pushing it through an equalizer to change the levels and take out the background fuzz.
re-do this! With cool voice!
Like it but:
Excuse me but no one can spit on this track so can you honestly call it hip hop beat? Don't get me wrong, it's just unspittable dude.
haha definently man, i made this version as more of a stand alone song, i originally made it simpler and cleaner for rapping along to for a friend, but added some melody parts. I can upload the other version if you're interested. Anyways thanks for the comments I appreciate it
Yeah.. I like it
Yeah... Something random going on. That's alright ^^
Good but not as good
I like the original one more, it has more spirit. You spoil it with too many strings going at the same time.
Alright, go listen to that one then.
It's good but...
Damn, you can't rhyme dude :S
Sounds like infinite album tracks! This is a good start =D
Thnaks dude. Hahaha. I hope you meant it sounded album quality, not like tons of songs you've heard prior to this. Thanks for listening and reviewing.
You can't rhyme sorry.
We were taking a risk with this track Matti mixing old school with abit of guitar and trying to keep the feel with the flow but I guess it just can't pertain to everyones standards, regardless thanks for the review and score but def try out some of the other tracks on this page and see if your feeling anything.
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